Not gonna lie, I miss the lowpassed strings from the original, but this is far better. The way that the song is structured is different, but still taking in your style of buildups, dropoffs, and breaks.
The instrumentation is solid overall, though some of them may need slight EQ changes.
The chords are definitely different from the original, and it may be for the better, different solos can be made this way, and could garner far better results from the original, which it has.
The submarine radar ping shouldn't really be hard-panned to the left, it kinda gets to you in a ear-numbing way, maybe put it 75% to the left and 25% right?
I know this is a finished product, and that this review is 2 years late (almost literally) but at least it's constructive criticism, right?